Gathering Storm

Mono Round 2
Mono Division Division C

Comments

Well done. Personally i would of toned down, the brightness on the water. It is a touch too bright and may be better still for you less light. The shadows and darkness in the foreground is too dark and in shadow and highlights you can put more detail into the shadow areas. Lifting it in the foreground a little may improve it still further for you. Does not matter now as you did well anyway. But it may make it even better for you and if you put it in to anything else.